diff --git a/docs/source/guides/admin-guides/manage_clusters/ppc64le/discovery/seq_discovery.rst b/docs/source/guides/admin-guides/manage_clusters/ppc64le/discovery/seq_discovery.rst index 42403b26e..00dff6d54 100644 --- a/docs/source/guides/admin-guides/manage_clusters/ppc64le/discovery/seq_discovery.rst +++ b/docs/source/guides/admin-guides/manage_clusters/ppc64le/discovery/seq_discovery.rst @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ .. include:: ../../common/discover/seq_discovery.rst -When the physical location of the server is not so important, sequential base hardware discovery can be used to simplify the discovery work. The idea is: providing a node pool, each node in the pool will be assigned an IP address for host and an IP address for FSP/BMC, then match first came physical server discovery request to the first free node in the node pool and configure the assigned IP address for host and FSP/BMC onto that pysical server. +When the physical location of the server is not so important, sequential-based hardware discovery can be used to simplify the discovery work. The idea is: provided a node pool, each node in the pool will be assigned an IP address for host and an IP address for FSP/BMC, then the first physical server discovery request will be matched to the first free node in the node pool, and IP addresses for host and FSP/BMC will be assigned to that physical server. .. include:: schedule_environment.rst .. include:: config_environment.rst @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ To prepare the node pool, shall predefine nodes first, then initialize the disco Predefine nodes ``````````````` -Predefine a group of node with desired IP address for host and IP address for FSP/BMC:: +Predefine a group of nodes with desired IP address for host and IP address for FSP/BMC:: nodeadd cn1 groups=powerLE,all chdef cn1 mgt=ipmi cons=ipmi ip=10.0.101.1 bmc=50.0.101.1 netboot=petitboot installnic=mac primarynic=mac @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Specify the predefined nodes to the nodediscoverstart command to initialize the nodediscoverstart noderange=cn1 -Pls see "nodediscoverstart man page" for more details. +See "nodediscoverstart man page" for more details. Display information about the discovery process ``````````````````````````````````````````````` @@ -50,6 +50,6 @@ Note: The sequential discovery process will be stopped automatically when all of Start discovery process ----------------------- -To start discovery process, the system administrator need to power on the servers one by one manually. Then the hardware discovery process will start automatically. +To start the discovery process, the system administrator needs to power on the servers one by one manually. Then the hardware discovery process will start automatically. .. include:: standard_cn_definition.rst